Wine Making MG Style: by Darlene Beck Jacobson
This scene is from a historical MG WIP:
Pa wanted berries so he could make his home made wine.
Pa wanted berries so he could make his home made wine.
Summer was nearly done and most of the bushes picked over. A few pea-sized berries were
scattered around this late in the season. Not nearly enough to fill even half a bucket. I was ready to go home.
Until I heard whistling and saw a boy emerge from the trees.
āHi,
Joe.ā
āHey,
Helen. What are you doing out this early?ā
āPa
wants these buckets filled with...ā I stopped when I saw his pail brimming with
plump, ripe berries. āWhereād you get those?
Iāve been out here since the sun came up and this is all Iāve got.ā
Joe
grinned. āIāve got a special place, not too many people know about. I donāt
want people messing it up.ā
āCan
you take me there, Joe. Please? If I come back with empty buckets, Paāll be
mad.ā
āHow
do I know I can trust you not to tell?ā
āI like knowing
thereās a special place nobody knows about.ā
I could tell by the look on Joeās face that he knew what I meant by
secret places. I looked him in the eye
and said, āIt will just be our secret.ā
Joeās
look was so intense, my stomach suddenly felt quivery. I was glad he stopped staring
and said, āYou have to promise that if you come back here, you come alone.ā Joe
spit on the palm of his hand and held it out.
I
set my bucket down, worked saliva around my tongue, spitting a glob of it onto
a palm. We pressed our palms together and slid them across the sticky surfaces,
smiling at each other.
āFollow
me,ā Joe said.
We
hiked about a half mile, through the bushes, into the hills.
I stared with
amazement. āThereās enough here to fill ten buckets.ā
āTheyāre
a lot sweeter than the ones down below.ā
I
stuck my tongue out and he dropped the berry onto it. āYummy.ā I dumped out the
small, hard berries Iād gotten below, and began filling my pail with the
perfect ones.
āGive
me the other pail and Iāll fill it for you.ā
In
no time at all we filled both buckets and looked as if weād barely touched the
bushes.
āWhat does you Pa want these for?ā
āWine.ā
Joe
looked at me, a sudden spark in his eyes. āDo you know how to make wine?ā
āNo.ā
I shrugged.
Joe
set the bucket down and untied his shoes.
āWhat
are you doing?ā
āDo
you want to make wine or donāt you?ā
āHow
can we make wine here?ā
āTake
off your shoes.ā Joe laughed when I turned up nose as he wiggled his bare
feet. āI saw this book once about Italy. They
made wine by smashing grapes with their feet.ā He smiled. āWe could do the same
thing with the berries. You game?"
Man, I love your historical fiction.
ReplyDeleteThat is so kind of you Holly! It means a lot coming from someone whose writing I really love as well.
ReplyDeleteHow fun!
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