January Theme: Forget Beginnings—Skip to the Good Parts Instead
Marcia Thornton Jones
In every class I teach, writers want to know the best way to
start their books. That's understandable since we’ve all heard that the opening page needs to convey tone, voice and genre, introduce character, setting, and
conflict, and create page-turning tension that hooks readers (including editors
and agents). It's a lot to ask of a first page or two, so I can see why so
many participants in my workshops and classes want to spend time learning the
best way to start their books, and I’m happy to oblige them. That being said,
one thing I notice is that writers, including me, often get so focused on
writing the best damn beginning we can, that we never get around to writing the
rest of the story. And if we do, I’ve found that the beginning we spent so much
time writing and revising and honing often doesn’t end up being the beginning
at all. So, when talking about opening scenes, here’s what I think: go ahead and study first pages of successful
books to determine what works (and what doesn’t), but don’t obsess about your
own beginning until you are honing the final drafts. Instead, skip
to the good parts of your story. Write those scenes and don’t worry too much about the
opening. Then, when you feel like you’ve told your characters’ story, go back
and figure out the scene that would be the best place for your readers to enter
that story. But if you are at that part of your writing process, the part where
you need to write the best damn beginning you can, then you just might want to
check out Stephanie Orges’s May 4, 2012 “The 21 Best Tips for Writing Your
Opening Scene” bekindrewrite.com blog for excellent tips:
Thanks for sharing those tips Marcia.
ReplyDeleteThat's so true--the beginning can often be the last thing you write!
ReplyDeleteI don't know if I could do this, Marcia - I'm SUCH a begin-at-the-beginning person - but you've made me tempted to try. I've heard other authors say they begin by writing the LAST scene - that it helps them to begin if they know ahead of time where it's all going to end...
ReplyDeleteI understand. I like to write from beginning to end. So go ahead...but don't get bogged down with the beginning since it might change once you start revising!
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