January Theme: A Roller Coaster of Firsts (Platte Clark)
As a new author I have the thrill and anxiety of everything being a first. The process is very much like a roller coaster ride, starting with that long climb of getting your book completed, to that very first drop called the query letter process. I still have my first response:
At the moment I’m working with my first editor at S&S Aladdin, and I can say I've already learned a few things:
- “I’m sorry to say that in this instance I am going to pass on your work. The children’s and YA market is very competitive, as you may well know, and I have to feel a very high degree of confidence in a particular story to take it on. While yours certainly has its merits, I’m just not quite convinced it’s one for me.”
- “Thanks for your query. I’d be pleased to consider The Codex…Can you kindly send the full manuscript as a word doc. attachment via e-mail?”
At the moment I’m working with my first editor at S&S Aladdin, and I can say I've already learned a few things:
- Adding an unprompted 20,000 words to your rewrite is not necessarily a good thing. Apparently it messes up all kinds of profit and loss spreadsheets and it's harder to carry the pages around the office.
- The passive voice is not much loved.
- Don’t get too attached to titles.
- If your editor is from Texas, he or she will be delighted with any and all Jackalope references you can throw in.
"“I’m sorry to say that in this instance I am going to pass on your work. The children’s and YA market is very competitive, as you may well know, and I have to feel a very high degree of confidence in a particular story to take it on. While yours certainly has its merits, I’m just not quite convinced it’s one for me.” "
ReplyDeleteFwiw, I recognize this rejection and well remember the particular "ouch" it gave me, too.
Congrats on being well past that stage of the game now!
-- Tom
Thanks Tom, and good luck with your writing.
ReplyDeleteI second Tom's congrats, Platte. And here's to hoping that old publishing coaster NEVER gets tiresome and ALWAYS feels thrilling.
ReplyDeleteSo Fun!
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