Unfinished Writing Under the October Sky: Jen Cervantes
It
all started the night Mrs. Winchester’s house was torpedoed by a falling star. Of
all the houses in all the world, that star picked 222 Happleberry Lane right
next to Ruby’s house. And as quick as a mean strike of lightning, Mrs.
Winchester was gone. They found her bones as deep as twenty feet, scattered,
broken, even melted into the blackened earth. Some of her bones were never
found.
The
stately Victorian house (which had just been named a “historical gem” by the
Historical Society of Misty Crossing) was miraculously still standing. Barely.
Its wide
wraparound porch
was scorched around the edges. Dark smudges marked the planks, as if something
very black and very big had been dragged across it. The wood pillars looked
more like toothpicks, splintered and bent, not nearly strong enough to hold up
the porch. And the third floor roof suffered a dozen canonball-sized holes, one
had slammed through two floors and Mrs. Winchester’s bed. But the house still
had its Historical Gem sign planted
in the front yard right next to the Condemned
sign.
As
Ruby lay in her bed she thought about coincidences, mishaps, and mistakes. If
only her mother hadn’t been visiting Mrs. Winchester that night. If only she’d
stayed home to sew the green sequins on Ruby’s silk slippers. If only….
Those
two words floated like dainty snowflakes too small to grab hold of before
melting. And now unable to sleep, Ruby sank into her down pillow and stared at
the flickering stars millions and millions of miles away in the black October
sky. They were fixed, unmoving, like someone had fastened them with screws.
None dangled, drooped, or swung. No tell-tale threat that one was about to fall.
Suddenly, she hated those stars.
The
grandfather clock downstairs tick tick ticked with its predictable rhythm,
growing louder and louder the more Ruby thought and tossed and turned. She
could hear her father’s soft crying floating down the hall. It had been three
weeks since her mother had died and her father had closed himself off from the
world. He was unshaven, pale, skinny, and even somewhat crazed. At first Ruby
had wanted him to come out, to talk to her and tell her it was all going to be
okay, but as the days passed and his eyes grew puffier and redder and his mind
grew more lost and his heart more broken, Ruby secretly wanted him to stay
behind the closed door.
The
moonbeam grew brighter, like a flashlight shining on her pillow.
It
was no good.
She
rolled back the covers and slipped out of bed.
In
the silvery moonlight, Ruby peered at the road outside. Tall Victorian houses
lined both sides of Happleberry Lane. The black pointed roofs looked like crooked
rows of giant witch hats. Ruby let her eyes follow the moon’s light back to
Mrs. Winchester’s sad and lonely house. It looked pale, ghostly, almost see
through. And then...
Sshhhhkrape…
The
sound sent shivers up Ruby’s spine, spreading like tiny fingers tickling her
scalp.
Sshhhhkrape…
There
was something coming up the road. But from her vantage point, Ruby couldn’t
quite see…
Taking
two stairs at a time, she hurried into the living room and peered through the
velvet drapes.
She’d
been wrong. There wasn’t something coming up the road.
There
were two somethings.
Two
dark hooded figures drew closer. And closer. The figures’ arms hung so low that
their knuckles nearly dragged on the pavement. Their heads lolled around like
puppets and their hoods flopped back and forth but never enough that Ruby could
see any faces hidden there. They staggered and limped like their legs were
nothing but string.
Ruby
ducked beneath the windowsill. Her eyes hovered over the edge. The dark figures
were coming toward her. Closer and closer.
She
held her breath.
They
dragged themselves across Mrs. Winchester’s front yard.
The
moon turned its face behind a veil of gray clouds.
The
clock ticked. Ruby’s father whimpered.
She
couldn’t tear her gaze away. She had to know what they were. She strained to
see.
The
somethings each dragged a big black bag behind them.
Sshhhhkrape…
It
sounded worse than rusty scissors on a chalkboard. One bag slammed into the Historical Gem sign, knocking
it into the dead grass. A trail of bones tumbled out. Ruby’s gaze followed the
dark things as they hobbled up the walkway.
Up
the stairs.
Onto
the porch.
Their
black tattered robes dragged behind them like trails of smoke.
And then came the knock.
Ooo, spooky! This is a terrific beginning. I am immediately hooked. Happy Halloween!!!
ReplyDeleteHappy reading and writing! from Laura Marcella @ Wavy Lines
Thanks so much, Laura!
DeleteNice job Jen! You really set a creepy mood and page turning tale. Love it...perfect for Halloween.
ReplyDeleteI had the same reaction: OOOOH! Loved it!
ReplyDeleteYou're a gem, Holly! Thanks :)
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